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So, I was having a chat with my good friend
danchekker (who is now on DreamWidth, guys! You should all go friend her up!), and we started to talk about how we each always write "the same story."
So, I thought it be awesome if people turned a critical eye to their own writing, and in as humorous a way as possible, described their most overused tropes. Here are mine!
One person listens to another person tell a two-fold story about the past: a happy opening, with a shocking turn that hints at the innate unfairness and violence of the world. The speaker always delivers this speech while talking in a faraway voice and while not making eye contact. At a later point, this story is either literally or metaphorically important to events that transpire.
APPARENTLY THIS IS WHAT I THINK MEANINGFUL CONVERSATIONS ARE
BASICALLY, I WRITE LIKE LIGHTNING SPEAKS
ALL OF MY CONVERSATIONS ARE BETWEEN LIGHTNING AND HOPE, AND LIGHTNING IS SAYING "Lightning can't protect, it can only destroy."
FFFEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELLLLLLLLLLLIIIIIINNNNNNNNNGGGGGGGGGSSSSSSSSS
Furthermore, all of my characters are constantly struggling with self-destructive tendencies ("aren't we all?", I justify to myself), and ALSO my most dramatic deaths have the dying cough up blood.
Lastly, I'm finding it a little difficult to find FF characters' voices in longer dialogues. Cause, uh, in the game they really don't talk in more than a few sentences at a time, nor do they have meaningful discussions about feelings that don't descend into platitudes. THIS IS WEIRD
And how that I've said all this, I can't unsee it. aaarrrrrrggggghhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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So, I thought it be awesome if people turned a critical eye to their own writing, and in as humorous a way as possible, described their most overused tropes. Here are mine!
One person listens to another person tell a two-fold story about the past: a happy opening, with a shocking turn that hints at the innate unfairness and violence of the world. The speaker always delivers this speech while talking in a faraway voice and while not making eye contact. At a later point, this story is either literally or metaphorically important to events that transpire.
APPARENTLY THIS IS WHAT I THINK MEANINGFUL CONVERSATIONS ARE
BASICALLY, I WRITE LIKE LIGHTNING SPEAKS
ALL OF MY CONVERSATIONS ARE BETWEEN LIGHTNING AND HOPE, AND LIGHTNING IS SAYING "Lightning can't protect, it can only destroy."
FFFEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELLLLLLLLLLLIIIIIINNNNNNNNNGGGGGGGGGSSSSSSSSS
Furthermore, all of my characters are constantly struggling with self-destructive tendencies ("aren't we all?", I justify to myself), and ALSO my most dramatic deaths have the dying cough up blood.
Lastly, I'm finding it a little difficult to find FF characters' voices in longer dialogues. Cause, uh, in the game they really don't talk in more than a few sentences at a time, nor do they have meaningful discussions about feelings that don't descend into platitudes. THIS IS WEIRD
And how that I've said all this, I can't unsee it. aaarrrrrrggggghhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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Date: 2011-08-01 11:16 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-08-01 11:23 pm (UTC)I point out Hope and Lightning's conversation because, actually, that's some of the best character development/advancement in any of the FF games. Basically, we get to see a headstrong and lonely character 1) explain why she behaves the way she does, 2) not too long after the game has started, and 3) she ends up tacitly acknowledging that she has deep character flaws: trust issues and a natural inclination to destroy rather than protect, but 4) she -- and here's the kicker -- she admits she's trying to change.
Problem is, I like this conversation a little too much, methinks.
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Date: 2011-08-01 11:38 pm (UTC)You know what my trope is?
open-ended endings... at the end of stories. I like to write things that make people go. "Huh, she had a point." OR "Huh, I wonder how everything will eventually turn out."
That is my big thing.
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Date: 2011-08-01 11:41 pm (UTC)no subject
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Date: 2011-08-01 11:57 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-08-01 11:59 pm (UTC)Also: I cannot find that scene on YouTube -- have you been able to?
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Date: 2011-08-01 11:29 pm (UTC)Alsoalso: I really like Vaan's interactions with most everyone, but particularly Ashe. Because Vaan basically says all the right things about Rasler and his death.
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Date: 2011-08-02 12:22 am (UTC)One character is all like D: and another character realizes it and then they have a moment of bonding and then they move on with their lives.
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Date: 2011-08-02 12:43 am (UTC)But, yeah, same difference.
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Date: 2011-08-02 12:48 am (UTC)I have too much variation, I guess. I tried to be vague enough to capture everything.
Maybe... people live lives and stuff happens and they're unhappy but they try and sometimes give up and there are other people around them who notice these things and sometimes they allow these people in. Sometimes they don't. And it goes on. Because life is just a thing and sometimes it rocks and sometimes it sucks, and sometimes you rage and sometimes you cry and sometimes you enjoy and it's all part of everything.
I think at this point, I may as well say: stuff happens and life occurs.
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Date: 2011-08-02 12:50 am (UTC)I have a guess for the murderer, its MAKO_LIES, WITH A BLUDGEON, ON DREAMWIDTH
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Date: 2011-08-02 12:58 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-08-02 01:00 am (UTC)(But I'm still trying to find that scene I write all the time. Because I'm still struggling to come up with anything. XD)
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Date: 2011-08-02 01:17 am (UTC)Happy in the midst of unhappy?
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Date: 2011-08-02 02:30 am (UTC)OR
People say stuff. What do they MEAN by it?
Fortunately, I do this hopping around fandoms, so maybe no one but me will notice?
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Date: 2011-08-02 02:39 am (UTC)http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LRq_SAuQDec
...I am feeling the Red Dwarf love. Perhaps I will write a story where Jaded, embittered Kochanski finds a reason to go on/do the right thing through interaction with/understanding of the cat
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